Young gun

This hits the reader right in the face.Which is good.You just need to work along the realistic and plausible parts a bit more.

A good job for a first start.

Not bad but you can work on being clearer about your ideas in other poems. Good luck

I found this decent for a reading.There is no problem whatsoever, except for the conversations in the beginning.

If Aja Aja is pronounced as aa-ja than it means "come come".

Thank you all for your reviews.They were very helpful.

Not any flaws to point out to, so I guess this one gets a gold star.

1.The Black Swan 2.Freakonomics 3.Outliers 4.The complete Sherlock Holmes Just one of them is fiction.

This was very nice.Keep writing poems like these. All the best with your future writing.

Thank you all for your reviews.They were very helpful.

Quite good for a start.

This was good as a general story. Would like to see what part 3 would be like.All the best

Thanks for the feedback.If possible, I may be able to work on X's role a little more and try to improve the story.

Quite good for a first poem. The technique of building the climax was just brilliant.The element of surprise was very nice and the overall presentation was brilliant. The last line ...

Thanks.Once my holidays start ill post some more of this kind of stuff.Hopefully,it should be as good.